NaNoWriMo Day 4 2017

A little unedited excerpt from this year’s NaNoWriMo Novel – MarkazDay 4 Words

The loud laughter of middle-aged men erupted throughout the bar. Isott looked over to the disturbance, shaking her head. Daniel tapped her on the arm, gesturing to her to look again. What she saw was impossible. One of the two men was pointing at a drink, concentrating on a glass that had the drink flowing straight up into the air. He then carefully brought his arm down and the fluid went into the glass. They both laughed and his partner yelled, “Higher”. The other man focused his attention on the glass and the liquid rose out of the glass higher than before. He then gestured to an empty glass and moved the liquid to it, splashing as it fell into the glass. They slapped each other on the back. The tavern was silent by now watching the two. They didn’t notice the silence or attention. The one moving the liquid said something to the other, who nodded his head. The strange focusing of the two men returned and the liquid at the table went into the air. The one gestured to an empty glass at a table near them were some merchants were watching and dropped the beer into one of their glasses. Sloshing most of it onto the table. The woman picked it up the drink and toasted them, laughing.

Isott’s looked back to the two men, they were concentrating harder now. Beads of sweat forming on their foreheads. The men noticed everyone watching them now and the one seemed to be focusing on all the tables at once. They both seemed to glow? And then all the drinks on almost every table rose into the air, higher and higher, almost touching the ceiling.

“I am the greatest,” bellowed the man standing holding both hands high in the air. He was in ecstasy from something and then all the drinks in the air fell soaking the patrons, producing screams and complaints. Isott watched as the man arms still high in the air grew brighter and then collapsed like a sack of corn to floor unmoving. His companion now stood looking at his own hands. He too seemed to glow. He cried out, “I can’t get rid of it!” Looked down at his chest, “No” and exploded.

Imperfect details…

Your writing doesn’t have to be perfect. There’s a reason editors exist. My writing goal this week is to write and plan based on those words. I realized that I have been not writing because I have been waiting for NaNoWriMo. There is no reason at all I can’t be writing or editing one of the other novels I have half done that are lying around getting dust while I plan and plot for NaNo. My goal should be to write every day. Taking breaks as needed to re-charge the creative juices.

 

It’s the imperfect details of perfect worlds I love. I just wish my worlds were a little more perfect and less chipped.

NaNoWriMo 2016 Winner? Or “Now I have to edit this dam thing…”

A slap dash overview of my last month of writing – grammar optional.

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50,195 words in 29 days. The novel isn’t finished, perhaps, I wrote too much outline. It is looking like the novel will finish around 75,000 words.
What novel you ask? Why, Einstein’s Fallacy, thanks for asking. A high school physics teacher becomes the protector of a genius high school student who has discovered a mistake with Einstein’s work. An idea that is dangerous, in many ways. They travel to CERN the centre of Quantum physics where they meet Dr.Stephen Hawking. He introduces them to Dr.Tomas Cardona who will aid them in the development of this revolutionary idea and Leon Trask, Silicon Valley Entrepreneur.

Ben, the student wants to get to space. To, as he puts it, “Get off this damm rock and all it’s petty people.”

Lisa’s long term relationship over she wistfully wonders if she chose the right career path.  And gets a chance to be her dream, a researcher.

Dr.Brenda Sawyer, Lisa’s mentor at University and connection to CERN.

Tomas, realizes that what he has believed, researched, his life’s work is mis-guided and wants to regain a purpose.

Leon Trask, wise and wants to make money, more importantly make power his companion.

Katherine and Jason Hock – two to of the richest people in the world see the threat Ben’s ideas hold and want to control it. Ruthless would be a kind word for their tactics.

Three wise men who see the danger posed by the discovery who enlist the aid of Graywater and the Hock’s to manage the chaos they see coming.

Graywater – a private security contractor with no national boundaries. Protectors yes, mercenaries, certainly.?)

Be Well – dcd

 

N A N O W R I M O 2 0 1 5 P A R T D E U

Way behind this year, like way, way behind. Made it to the second write-in. However, I clearly understand how very little I know about mysteries. Every time I write a sentence, thousands of questions jump out of my mind. Like, if an adult child dies and the parents are still alive and are broke, but the will states that all the money goes to a  charity. Are parents entitled to money? So confusing? How long in real time do all the tests and lab reports take. So many questions, fortunately  I work for a law firm now… le sigh!

How far behind – about half of what I should be. But I have a plan a cunning plan! An update with an excerpt later.

Be Well – dcd

NaNoWriMo – 50179 – Winner Winner Chicken Dinner!

Made it and validated at 50179- still have to get through a funeral and stirring speech about change, 50k dragon is slayed. I tried numerous times to kill off my heroine at the end of the book. She refused to die. Now to put it on the first draft revision list. I already know much of what I want to do. I suspect I need to add a couple chapters. But hey, I am the author I am allowed to re-write…Be well. (Changed my mind, added some raw writing)

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Once again the ground bubbled, and changed. The lava started to roll towards the stone walls. Either Elias didn’t believe what he been told about the events of earlier today or no one from the battle survied. It didn’t matter the lava slowly rolled to the stone walls. Elias remained on the wall staring down at what he was seeing. The sound of the rolling lava changed as it hit the stone wall. The hissing grew louder and the lava grew with intensity. And once the stone started transforming it tore threw the stone wall like it wasn’t there. It seemed it was easier for Jorunn and Othin to change the stone into lava than the earth. The walls started to crumble and fall. Jorunn watched as Elias fell into the lava screaming. But she still pushed on the walls of lava forming a circle and moving faster as the closed in to the center. And then it was over. There was no Febostead. There was burnt, charred, melted stone and nothing else. There was no Febostead.

NaNoWriMo – Day 21 34,484 – still behind

It is the start of the weekend that I need to catch up and get ahead, if I am going to make. it. The last two days I have made good progress in catching up. The Edmonton WriMo write in helped a lot. Today went well too! And I am getting pretty excited to see what happens! Here’s today’s raw excerpt:

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They gathered them all together, Noak and Neilsen were both showing the advanced signs of withdrawal. Jorunn explained Colith’s plan to them.

“Are you mad! You are going to let crazy witch woman poison Noak and Neilsen on the ‘hope’ that it ‘might’ cure them” Gaerth said

“There has to be something else we can try,” Othin said

Jorunn let them argue back and forth, waiting.

“Why?” Noak said, “Why would you help us, we are nothing to you.”

Colith looked at Noak.

“How would you know anything about me, child?” Colith said

“Colith, we don’t know anything about you. But you have to admitt that it is pretty odd for a complete stranger to help out. What amounts to fugitves, renegades.”

“You will not understand my reason’s for they are my own. How can you understand another? We can’t, we are alone, we share but brief moments in common actions. But do we truly ever know another. A man and a wife can be married and have many children and then one day the man leaves, did they know each other? No. My reason’s for helping you are simple, I know that for someone to make a poison such as this they are evil. They seek power for themselves. What other reason is there. None of you here are criminals. I have been alive long enough to know this. None of you can lie well. You are all an open book. Why do you think you have stayed together? You have stayed together because you are honest people and the honesty inside you resonants with the honesty in the others. It practically drowned me when you first arrived.” Colith said

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The quest continues to complete NaNoWriMo – I expected to be farther along after this weekend. Sadly I am slightly behind. Also I have realized that I one less day to complete the challenge due to a previous commitment. And this commitment occurs on November 29th. A first world problem to say the least… 😉

Here is your raw excerpt for today –

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“You will stay there until you agree not to pull magic.” Brin said, “I know what you are going through. For the first time in your life you are not getting what you wanted. All Channelers are spoiled, we are precious, a treasure and most of all, use to getting our own way. In this last day I have come to the conclusion that this, channelers getting their own way, is the biggest mistake the college has made. And you will learn this lesson. Gaerth. You must learn this lesson. Brin said

I hope I don’t look as shocked as Jorunn does right now, Othin thought. It is hard to beleive that Taylor standing up to Brin could have produced such a profound change. Neilsen was holding Noak who was looking away, not wanting to see Brin broken. She had done her part in showing the solidarity of the Channelers. Jorunn walked over and sat on the ground beside Gaerth.

“Gaerth, you were the first champion for channelers I ever met. My first day at the college I saw you in the practice grounds. Fireball after, after fireball flying straight and true to its target. You stood so proud so powerful. Maester Plys took us past your practice. He waited until you paused. He call down to you, asking if you had any words for the new channelers. Looking up from the grounds, seeing all of us in awe and adoration. Do you remember what you said?” Jorunn said

“I said, what are you looking at! He’s doing all the work. Without a forge a Channeler is nothing.” Gaerth said

“That was my first formal lesson. I always ask Othin if it is ok to draw magic. You taught me that. “ Jorunn said.

Tears welled in Gaerth’s eyes and a wracked sob came out. Calin came and knelt with him. Brin released Gaerth. Gearth reached out to Calin.

“I am so sorry, Calin. How could I have forgotten.” Gaerth said. His body heaved with the sobs coming out of Gaerth. Calin held him close. Jorunn stood, patted Calin on the shoulder and walked back to Othin.

“He is a stronger man than I.” Othin said

“Why do you think that I always ask before pulling, Othin?” Jorunn said.

“I thought it was because you were kind. But now I don’t know. I think you do it becuase you are afraid that I will say no.” Othin said.

“You are correct, and I would never want to hurt you. But you must know this, there will come a time when I won’t have time to ask, I will need you to trust me., to give me the power.” Jorunn said

“Always, Jorunn, I will always give the power. Without you I had no purpose, I was just a blustering loud mouth. Now I have purpose.” Othin said.

Othin reached over and hugged Jorunn, tears in his eyes. He was a fortunate man.